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He was well enough within a few days to go back to town and try and sell his Thneed. He failed once and went back one last time before finally becoming angry enough that he threw it. He never knew that that would be the cause of his success or his fall from glory.
He thought back on this time he spent with his animal friends.
"'Drey? How much longer before the 'wonderful surprise?'" He wondered out loud. "Because you have no idea what I wouldn't give for trees, another round with pneumonia and some pancakes," he said looking out on his wasteland.
She said. She promised! All he had to do was wait. So, he took wood and boarded up his window. "You said wait. So, here I am 'Drey I'm waiting."
I've actually finished it.
There is a really sweet picture drawn of some clips of the story that I thought I should aknowledge here is the [link]
They are drawn by the fabulous sapphirewolf2 thank you love for their awesomeness.
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numbuh35 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
Awesome ending!! It suits the book and the movie so well :)
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
Thank you so so much :D I always try to combine them and never sure if I suceed.
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sjade15 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is the saddest/ awesomest story EVER *throws arms in air!*
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Thank you so very very much. It really makes me happy to know I've made sad awesome and brought people into an alternate reality if only for a few hours. :)
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sjade15 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
And thank you for sharing it ^_^ Alternate reality's are the best!
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
They really are aren't they? They are so much fun to ecape into after a really long day.
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ChristmasKitten1 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww this is amazing! :iconawwplz:
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Thanks so much :D
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ChristmasKitten1 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student General Artist
:)
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
:D
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sparklykitty Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist
Wow! :iconsadplz:
That was beautiful!
I LOVED IT!
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Thanks you sooooo much :)
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sparklykitty Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist
Your so welcome! :)
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
:D
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PinkSoda12 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
I loved this story sooooo much!!! You should definetely write more~!!
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Thanks I'm working on another fic that delves into who 'Drey is and that sort of thing. I just need to figure out how I want chapter 1 to start. Oncie ended up FAR too depressed the way chapter 1 is now. I need to edit.
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PinkSoda12 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
I'll be happy to read it when your done, it sounds interesting!!!
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Thanks :) :D
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sapphirewolf2 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nicely done! Wonderful story!!! :hug:
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
Thanks so much I'm so glad you liked it. I'm thinking about doing one that involves the promise, which is kept at the end of the film and one about Once-ler and 'Drey's relationship. I don't know if I should though.
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sapphirewolf2 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The one about the promise will be interesting point of view. Also when the Once-ler and 'Drey meet and work on plans to start a business will be interesting, with a love twist.
:) Again lovely writing!!!
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ErikaRBarker Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
Thanks I'll see what comes of my drabbles and if I like 'em I'll post 'em.
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